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Web Page Design Extra Credit - Please Comment! by Birds-and-Such Web Page Design Extra Credit - Please Comment! by Birds-and-Such
Hello!!

I'm in this web page design class, and we were given an assignment to see who could get the most comments on our projects, so I would really appreciate you guys to take the time and throw me a comment! It would really help!

We had to make an entertainment web page design and so I chose Emiliana Torrini, an artist I really like.

I would appreciate any comments you can give, especially any critiques!

Thanks! :heart:
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:iconsheeraz247:
sheeraz247 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2016
Its Good Design
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:iconhdbishop:
hdbishop Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its good work visit
www.hdbishopdesigns.comoj.com
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:iconaamani:
aamani Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Not bad for a beginner , but still must working on it
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:iconaugustyne:
Augustyne Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I like how this looks. Are you going to really make this?
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:iconla-tachuela:
La-Tachuela Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the background should be a plain simple color and do with the texture on it.
The ribbon at right hand bottom corner- alittle bit to big should either remove it or make it smaller.
I think the mp3 player should be a much simple mp3 player, it does look a bit confusing and some may not be able to understand it.

Everything is good. Good Job.
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:iconxdamianart:
xDamianART Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Nice one, just change the fonts down there.. at the credits.
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:iconclemhyn:
Clemhyn Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Professional General Artist
should have made the background plain...I Like the idea though,,the colors are too cold...if you are gonna use grey put more white and make the other colors like red, red, dont tone its redness,the grey already did that for you..

But I really like the concept,good job :)
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:iconsheppard100:
sheppard100 Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
nice man! ;]
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:icondeepak250288:
deepak250288 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
its very nice web template.,bt u should improve more..
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:icondrawdesign:
DrawDesign Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Likes: The navigation is very well done, unique design of the notebook and ripped pages

Dislikes: The background would probably be better with a solid color
- the MP3 player needs to be moved, also the mp3 holder is a little confusing, a change would be nice
- a new picture of the singer as well, if you can
- the ribbon just doesn't sit well with me, it seems out of place


That's all I have since I too am a newbie at web designing as well.
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:icondancingvarcolac:
dancingvarcolac Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It looks good to me. The only things I have an issue with is the music player and the background. Personally I would put the music player under "music" in the menu. I think that the background could do without the texture. Maybe just a solid color instead. The rest looks fine. :D
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munawar-khel Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Hello,

Sorry i have been very busy lately just saw ur msg and yes regarding your project well i dont like the typo the fonts that you have used they look very outdated atleast in a fashion that you have used, regarding the username and password box i would say very much odd approach to a user centeric area i would recommend you too follow how other websites are doing so that user may know what and where to find what he/she is looking for.

For starters i wont mind it at all but yet i would agree with some of the comments below design seems a bit amateurish and lacks any real structure or proper flow and for that i would really recommend you to practice alot and visiting websites like smashingmagazine.com and webdesignerdepot.com for more ideas and help regarding user experience and user interface. hope that my comment and suggestion do help you
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BibisIN Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Well, my view is the following:
Like the arrangement of the layout is simple and easy to understand.
What could you reconsider, the font size on the whiteboard, it seems a bit small in my opinion. I do not know the work the work of Emiliana Torrini, but is this background color is not leaving the web site a bit "cold"?
We congratulate you! my comments are just a point of view, I have helped!
of a passadinha on my page
kisses kisses * - *
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:iconbibisin:
BibisIN Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Well, my view is the following:
Like the arrangement of the layout is simple and easy to understand.
What could you reconsider, the font size on the whiteboard, it seems a bit small in my opinion. I do not know the work the work of Emiliana Torrini, but is this background color is not leaving the web site a bit "cold"?
We congratulate you! my comments are just a point of view, I have helped!
of a passadinha on my page
kisses kisses * - *
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:iconstaxitix:
Staxitix Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Professional General Artist
As others have said, this has a lot of work before I would accept it into any gallery or portfolio. The design seems a bit amateurish and lacks any real structure or proper flow.
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:iconbellie:
Bellie Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Professional
This design is okay, I think you need to view some different graphic design forms of art like typography, vectors and digital art to improve your artistic eye :) Also focus on the colors and the quality.
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:iconapricum:
apricum Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's nice, but somehow the single parts of this design don't work together in a good way and the fonts aren't good. Good luck for the contest. I hope you will win!!!
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:iconsherif0666:
sherif0666 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
the redish new album is ugly, otherwise the menu (bio, music, concert) font and colors are interesting
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:iconvitatooo:
vitatooo Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
nice :-)
but you can minimalist the font
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:icondefinefear:
definefear Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hmmm... I'm not really diggin the way you placed your elements, but It's still a good piece. You should observe other designs and learn from them. also the mp3 player and ribbon doesn't really fit with the rest of your design, and I suggest you change it. :)

oh, and have you tried using grids ? they're really useful :)
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:iconcapondesign:
CaponDesign Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Things to change:
- get a thicker hand font. Its hard to read.
- the ribbon on the bottom is very "pixelated", try a vector illustration instead.
- The player on the bottom right hand is hard to read. change the colors to something with more contrast.
- add a naming convention to the sign in form. The inputs arn't labeled.
- choose a different background pattern. There are tons of free images on the net that are better then what you currently have.

Good layout though.
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:iconcalvinjarrod:
calvinjarrod Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The layout looks good! You should use a more readable hand written font, and copy font. But it looks pretty good!
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:iconelhosary:
elhosary Featured By Owner May 8, 2012   Interface Designer
In my opinion,You need to practice and watch the many other works to gain a sense of artistic .
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:icondutchdjd:
DutchDJD Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Student Interface Designer
I like it.

It looks good. Quality is a little bit low but that's a detail.

One thing:
You could change the music player from soundcloud to something else that fit with the rest of the page. Or just create one by yourself ;)

O btw: Don't use too much images. Your site will load slowly on the internet if you do.
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:iconlukeeeebennett:
LukeeeeBennett Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
It's an alright concept, but the quality is a little low.
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:iconalexeysmolyakov:
AlexeySmolyakov Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Nice layout, but if I were you I`d rework the ribbon a little bit :)
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:iconmikhailanikin:
mikhailanikin Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You gotta be kidding.
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:icondowntimestudio:
downtimestudio Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
good job, just some minor tweaks, rework the ribbon and your good to go...;)
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:iconprobablyart:
probablyart Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like it! Good Job.
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:iconrosedouglaswolf:
RoseDouglasWolf Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I like it. The theme is very appropriate for your main idea. :)
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:iconchosmos:
Chosmos Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Student Interface Designer
70/100.
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:iconrusrick:
rusrick Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I'd add a music player with some samples on the main page as well as a youtube or better yet vimeo video player to show some past concert clips. Instead of Buy Now I'd have a % off with a countdown clock to get people to order quickly. I agree you shouldn't be graded on number of comments on your design. Be better to have you actually put a site online and have Google Analytics show how many hits the site gets. The best design is nothing without hits in the web world.
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send2owais Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
well this gives us a feeling of a scrapbook, rather than an entertainment website.
Moreover, your teacher shouldn't assign you something on the basis of comments you get on DA....
anyways, it's a nice try. keep practicing :)
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:iconferyardiant:
feryardiant Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I think it's looks like a wire frame instead of web page design.
and just suggestion : please choose some common font and another colour scheme, it's looks creepy
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:iconmasoudhaghi:
masoudhaghi Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
i got you message about giving you some suggestion about your design.
if you are doing it as assignment for school, it looks fine to me. But if you are doing it as university project you should refine the background and use a clear font style like Arial. other than that, other things are fine.
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:iconprithu:
prithu Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
I think you should have some proper knowledge about front-end designing before designing a template; and try starting with wireframe and grids, it will help you a lot.
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:iconromirockstar:
romirockstar Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
you have to improve this design more. please use simple font style and try to minimalist everything
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:icondhosford:
dhosford Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hey there! I'm really digging the aesthetic you're going for, however, I feel like your grid is off technically. I feel as though the width of the photograph should be equal to the width of the first name on the logotype. Then you can bring the left margin of the content area over to the alignment of the last name, and continue the grid from there. Also, the login area should only be as long as the logotype is tall.

These are simple technical points that aren't absolutely necessary, but being trained by anal Graphic Design professors for so long does that to you haha. Not sure what your limitations are for the assignment, but I would add texture or maybe a very very soft gradient to the type in order to make it less flat.

Looks great otherwise! Keep it up and good luck!
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:icondirtek:
DirTek Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I agree with everything that has been said before.
You could reduce the size of the login box and do something about the menu. From my point of view, it's a little too crowded. I strongly agree with a different choice of fonts and raising the size. It's just really hard to read the content. The contrast is pretty good, I wouldn't change that. The structure is okay as well, but you might want to reduce the size of the large image from the left, so you can make the content larger.

Cheers and keep up the good work!
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GoldenSin Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, this looks fine but there are some things I would change if I were you.
Is this 100 % zoom? If yes, the font-size of the body text is a bit too small. I suggest you raise it a little. Or maybe I'm blind, which is possible. I should get new glasses. So if it doesn't bother anyone else, don't mind.
Also, what has happened to that SoundCloud widget?

Then, what is good: I like the layout and positioning of elements. I'm not sure whether the background of that SC widget fits the style of the site but I like it. It looks cool. The header font is great, as well. This is not a site of my taste but objectively this is pretty well designed.
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TriigzHD Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Good job, maybe just a different font. Not bad tho, hope you win the comments contest!
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:iconparammatharu:
ParamMatharu Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
firstly the font styles are not good, use some other simple fonts for the paragraphs and some good stylish fonts for some headings, and secondly give some gradient and some texture effects to the navigation, the hover "cross" effects looks bad, there should be a button for the "signin", so dnt use sparrow or other graphics for any type of button. use some more attractive and good colored graphics in the background, visit new sites, get inspired from that.. starting is good, but you need more and more practice to make very good designs.. keep going, all the best,, have a good day dear.. ;)
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:iconmatijaart:
MatijaART Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Header, footer and background are bad. But the content are is vell structured.
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michaeltuan97 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
:thumbsup:
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